Pitch Feedback

"we really like your idea and love the song choice! your choice of colour scheme we think will work really well and will tie in with your genre perfectly :)maybe you should've included images of what you wanted your artist to look like and some possible locations shots! "

This was our first comment from a class mate, we found it helpful because now we are reassured that the colour scheme will be popular and a positive aspect of the music video. We are however going to include a post of our blog filled with photographic images of our artist Skye so we can also test out the image such as the outfits and fashion style. Overall we have studied possible locations however we still need to take shots of real life locations that we will use.
Our teacher added to the feedback and commented on his likability of the name as it is original and different. This has reassured us that the name works well with not only the genre but also the song. After answering questions we were able to think more about the depth of the finalising the video, such as location and mise-en-scene.

''We like the location ideas you have, as there is a good variety, but we think you could maybe use the slow movement idea just in important aspects of your video :)''

This was our 2nd comment and it made us think about the slow movement and thinking about whether to put faster movement in the video rather than keep on doing slow movement as it may make the video a little boring and therefore it may make the video more exciting and make it look better. It has also given us the idea to use slow movement just in the important parts of the video rather than for the whole video as it means that there will be more movement.

We were asked after showing our pitch if we knew where we were going to shoot our video, the answer was that we do have some ideas. We know that we want some inside and some outside. This comment helped us because we now know that we need to start thinking about this in more detail and post some ideas onto our blog so that it is clear for people to see. We also got asked if we knew who we were going to use for our music. We did but again we now know that we need to make this more obvious and maybe get her more involved in posts on our blog, including photos.