Evaluation of Draft Video

I feel that the first video that we have done works quite well however I feel that we definately need to record the car bits in order to make it relate to the lyrics. I think that the stairs bit works really well as it looks like time has gone by really fast. I also think that in order to improve the video we need to make our video more proffesional and make it look more like a sterotypical music video. I feel that the video needs to be more sharp and I think that it also needs to have more locations. I think to improve the video Skye needs more makeup and we need to style her more. I also think that there needs to be more shots in the dark as I think that it wiull make it look much better visually. The most important aspect is that we need to finish all of the shots and get it done. I feel that some parts need to be refilmed as they aren't very proffesional looking.