Feedback from class

From my feedback from my class I found out:

The lip syncing is a bit off
She is looking at the camera a lot
Some shots are a little quick for a slow song
Some locations are a bit random
The black and white shots are effective
Shots in the car aren’t framed as well as others
Shots on the grass work really well
Singer looks a bit underenthusiastic, needs to be more energetic even if it is a slow song

Good syncing with piano
Locations get repetitive
Very repetitive
The piano setting is good because it looks realistic
Well framed
Singer looks realistic
Styled to fit genre
Lips could be more open

Good range of shots
Piano element looks good
Lip syncing looks good
Piano intro really effective
Singer really looks the part
Some shots cut really fast
Good lip sync
Use of white rose is good and related to song title
Good use of black and white effect
Hair and make up works well
The rose looks good
Black and white outfit looked a bit out of place
The piano shots look nice especially in black and white
The mise en scene is a bit too school
Some of the shots are a bit wide
Really good extreme close ups
Good dressing/ styling of character, looks very authentic
Could possibly have more action taking place
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