21 December 2011

Evaluation Question 1 Final



In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?



My music video uses many different forms of conventions throughout the video. The mise en scene is established in the first long shot and close ups and uses the performance aspect of the use of the piano. This establishes the character and after then changes to the use of hand held camera action shots and then leads into many close ups of the piano and of Skye in order to establish the character. I challenged other videos because they mostly all start with the character standing still for example Don’t go by Wretch 32 but I had movement with the use of the keyboard. 




The piano shots are done in black and white in order to establish the present day and the coloured parts are what she has been through in the past in order to get over her ex. This establishes her success, which is in black and white which was inspired by the video 'If I were a boy' by Beyoncé. This inspired me because it worked really well and showed the emotion through the use of the black and white. I developed this as most videos don’t use half black and white whereas they use all black and white therefore it meant that it challenged what’s in normal videos.



I was partially inspired by the use of the piano shots by the video Toccatta and Fugue by Myleen Class as she uses a grand piano throughout and she uses the use of simple colours and little happenings in the background as a similar surrounding to mine. I also looked at a variety of Alicia Key's videos and established parts I liked and used them for inspiration such as the fact that she looks up whilst playing as this shows she is an expert whereas in the Myleen class one it looks as if she knows less what she is doing. In my draft I copied the idea of looking down but I redid this as it didn't work as well as it did when she looked up. To challenge Myleen classes video I used the idea of my artist looking up in order to ake her seem more confident. I also challenged it because I used black and white imagery which meant that the keys stood out. 






During the storyboarding it was obvious that I wanted to portray the performance part to the video and therefore I made sure that it was a focus throughout the video. The storyboarding process was really important with the fact that I needed to follow it correctly. I decided to challenge the videos that I had seen by having really slow movement and I did this because I wanted it to be a simple video, which fits in with the genre.

Goodwins theory was used throughout, as there is a relationship between the visuals and the lyrics. The use of lip-syncing helps the audience gets a feel for her singing. I felt that I would like to keep Skye being subtle and have slow movement because in many of similar genres of music the character is still and hardly moving and also this fits in with the music and the visuals.


Goodwin suggests that there should be multiple close ups of the artist. There are multiple close ups of Skye as record companies want a lot of close ups of the artist as this increases the popularity. This also meant that the use of male gaze was easier. It also meant that Skye's style was focused on. However I feel it would possibly be better if there was a better use of male gaze involved, as it would mean that Skye could be focused on more. Throughout the video it uses male gaze as Skyes styling was done well which is shown in my feedback pages. 



Goodwin suggests that there needs to be Genre related style and iconography present. For this I made sure that Skyes style was shown through the video as the clothing fits the genre in the fact that they are natural clothes and very flowing. The makeup was kept very natural and simple as this fits in with the genre. Skyes character is really natural and quite confident which shows in the way she is singing and the way in which she is playing the Keyboard. The clothing appeals to females, as what she is wearing is very fashionable and popular of the target audience. 


I used a field setting as it was inspired by the video Battlefield by Jordin Sparks as she lays in a field which makes her look very natural and also fits in with the genre. I also got the idea of using the in car idea as it made it look very modern. 


The use of the iPhone shot shows that Skye is having a conversation with her ex and shows she's upset. She doesn't show her emotions, which shows that she is over him and her confidence is shown within the other shots. The iPhone fits in with the genre as it shows that she is rich and cares about how she looks. 




The rural setting was partly inspired by Rihannas song 'Only girl' as she uses lots of elements of field and also the flower was inspired by this video as flowers are seen as a thing of beauty and I wanted it to be a focus to show the natural tone of the video. Taylor swifts use of countryside in her videos also inspired me, however I changed this slightly in order to use more of the male gaze and added a white rose to show innocence. I developed the music video by using only a single flower rather than a load of flowers to make it a focus point. 




I used little movement as it is generally used in folk/ slow music genres and it means that it fits in with the music. The narrative throughout the video shows how Skye is alone and been neglected. But after the phone call it shows that Skye is in the car on her own as it shows that she is now in control of her life now she’s in the driving seat. 

Throughout my research and planning I found out that in all videos close ups are the main shots throughout, therefore I included many close ups which included the male gaze which is used throughout the video because I found out it is important within the music industry.

The ending of the video is of her performing and showing her ex how strong she is now he’s out of her life. I decided to use the piano because I felt that a lot of music videos focus on just the artist rather than the performance part therefore I used the idea of the piano. It also makes her seem more performance focused then focusing on how she looks. Finally the last shot is the same as the first as it makes it obvious that it is an intro and an outro, which makes the video work together as a whole and make it have some sort of start and finish to it. This also seems like she is presenting her story to the audience, like a narrator. 


Evaluation Question 2 Final

EVALUATION QUESTION 1

Evaluation Question 3 Final

21 November 2011

Video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KFqAKnQryCM

Today

Today I filmed the last shots, I refilmed the keyboard shots but instead used a piano. This enabled me to film at different angles and it fit with the music better as it was a piano type music.

19 November 2011

Plan for today

Today Holly is coming round to film the last shots of the video. I will hopefully get it all done today and today I will be filming the night time scenes so she will be coming around 5:00 as this is when it starts to get dark.

16 November 2011

Feedback from class

From my feedback from my class I found out:

The lip syncing is a bit off
She is looking at the camera a lot
Some shots are a little quick for a slow song
Some locations are a bit random
The black and white shots are effective
Shots in the car aren’t framed as well as others
Shots on the grass work really well
Singer looks a bit underenthusiastic, needs to be more energetic even if it is a slow song
Good syncing with piano
Locations get repetitive
Very repetitive
The piano setting is good because it looks realistic
Well framed
Singer looks realistic
Styled to fit genre
Lips could be more open
Good range of shots
Piano element looks good
Lip syncing looks good
Piano intro really effective
Singer really looks the part
Some shots cut really fast
Good lip sync
Use of white rose is good and related to song title
Good use of black and white effect
Hair and make up works well
The rose looks good
Black and white outfit looked a bit out of place
The piano shots look nice especially in black and white
The mise en scene is a bit too school
Some of the shots are a bit wide
Really good extreme close ups
Good dressing/ styling of character, looks very authentic
Could possibly have more action taking place
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Feedback of Video so far

I have asked some of my friends what they think of the video so far, I showed Mr Ford and he said that he liked it and that it was a massive improvement from my draft. He said that I may need to refilm the Keyboard scene because he feels she may need to be looking up as it shows confidence and shows she is a proffesional player. He also said that the field scenes work really well as it fits in with the genre. He also said that I may need to add more of the phone bit because he thinks it is a little random.
Feedback
Kam - I think that you have some good shots but do need to improve on other shots and think about the setting more but otherwise I think that the field shots work the best.
Karishma - I really like the styling of the artist because I think that it works really well. I love the field scenes as it looks really good and I think that she looks really confident.
Holly - I absolutley love the car bits but it's a little confusing at some bits because you don't know where the car is. I think that you definately need to fill in the parts which you haven't filmed.
Jaiman - I think that maybe the video needs to be more understandable and also I feel think that the styling is really good of 'Skye' as she looks really believable as an artist.
Leanne - I think that the style of 'Skye' works really well as the makeup looks really good and she has really nice clothes. She is really good at lip syncing but I think that to improve it to make it better.
Hope - I really like the car scene as she looks really believable that she is upset. I also think that the hair and makeup works well and it fits in with the song.

13 November 2011

Filming


This was the location for the keyboard part of the video and this was what it looked like before and I had to remove my room around in order to get a better mise en scene and to make it look more simple.


This was what it looked like when I moved the sofa and the other things away I moved the keyboard around in order to get the possible angle and I started filming with this angle but after I felt it looked better at an angle.


This was the keyboard scene and this is an image of the scene. I had to make sure that I cleaned the keyboard before as it was quite dusty.


This was the car scene and I put Skye in the front of the car. I wanted the grass to show through the window of the passenger side because I felt that it would make it look more countrysideish so the car was positioned on my drive so it looked like the car was on the grass.



This was the field scene and I had Skye lying on the grass. I filmed in my garden as it meant that I could be more organised and it meant that I could refilm easily.


I filmed from different angles to make sure that I had a variety of shots and I filmed above Skye to get some  upside down shots.

Styling Skye


This was the first outfit that I put Skye in. I chose this outfit because it was very flowy and natural which is what I was Skye to be portrayed as. I added fake eyelashes to Skye as you couldn't really see her eyelashes in the filming. I added them as they were more seeable in the filming. I also curled her hair to make it more presentable and so it looked good in the video.


This was the second outfit for the car scene. I though that I would keep this much more casual as well as keeping it quite fashionable. I kep the top as flowing because I felt it brang the genre through the clothing. I added jewellery as it meant that it was less boring and I added dark purple lipstick as it meant her lips struck out and this kept with the idea of male gaze.


This was the last outfit that I put Skye in was a long dress as these are in fashion at the moment, however the dress wasn't too fitted so I added a waistbelt in order to show of her waist. Again the dress was quite flowing which meant that it was easy for Skye to move aroudn in.

12 November 2011

Plan for tommorow

Holly will be coming round my house tomorrow and we will hopefully get most of the filming done. I am going to be filming the keyboard bits and also redo the grass bits as I feel the camera angles on them don't work too well. I am also going to be filming some parts in a car because I have been looking at videos to get inspiration and I feel that this works really well. I will be doing all of the night bits another day because Holly will be coming in the daytime.

6 November 2011

Plan for today

I am going into Lutterworth with Holly to start filming today. I am hoping to get the indoor shots done and I will be looking at costumes with her aswell.